Post by kimba on Mar 29, 2008 15:18:00 GMT -6
NAME: Kimba
AGE: 3 years old
GENDER: Male
PRIDE: If they are in a pride, what pride, if none, put something to the effect of 'Loner'.
RANK: N/A
PERSONALITY: Kindess strikes upon Kimba, making him just helpful and really generous. He is really good at fighting but only starts to be mean against other prides(even though he is a loner.) He only listens to his leader and some other lions that he knows who are also loners. Gentleness might come across sometimes, and he always shares some food or would if he was in a pride. He would do anything for you, if you was his leader or mate. He can sometimes get shy, but sometimes around females, he get real shy.
Sharing is mostly only with food, as he can be a bit mean with other lions. Especially ones who he does not have a clue who they are. He just does'nt like them, who he does not know at all. Or even who he has seen. who he does not have a clue who they are. He just does'nt like them, who he does not know at all. Or even who he has seen, sometimes. His strong muscles and body sometimes gets the female's to go around him, even though sometimes he just ignores them. Lots of people like him, he just is to scared to ask to join some prides. Even though he has always wanted to join atleast one.
PROS:
- Fighting.
- Being atractive for thhe Females.
- Just being Kind, helpful and generous.
CONS:
- Asking to join prides.
- Being around Females(even though good at being attractive.)
- Being that brave with really mean lions.
LIKES:
- Females.
- Being Helpful.
- Being really kind to whoever he likes.
DISLIKES:
- Asking to join.
- Mean Lions/animals.
- Not helping out with things.
APPEARANCE: Two words to describe Kimba is got to be...... Handsome, dreamy lion. His body is smooth and silky, with hardly no wrinkles. You could see the muscles just popping out from his strong body. Which are in his, legs(front and back), Middle body, tail and most of the other parts of his lion body. A medium shiny coat of gold and his mane as fluffy dark brown with a strike of jet black. Eyes are a drak blue as dreamy as any other lion could think them of. His fur is a light brown on his tummy and a bit a the slim side of his legs.
Claws are a black(for no reason) sharp dangerous part of him. Nose is a shiny black cute thing of him and his whiskers, are black and really long. Tail is a normal legnth with the same colour and fluffyness. Friends think he is very handsome and that his fur is really sparkly.
EYE COLOR: The colour of Kimba's eyes is a dark dreamy blue.
COAT COLOR: A dark, meadium, gold coat with light brown under his tummy.
DISTINGUISHING ASPECTS: A blood colour red hidden scar underneath his ear.
PHYSIC:Large lion and weighs about around 500lbs.
BREIF HISTORY: Born by really kind parents, and was born as a really big lion cub. Everyone made fun of him, only because he was big. His farther owned a pride as he was in one when little. And his farther was kinder to him than his mother but his mother was still kind. After his Mum died, he was seperated from his farther and could not live in that pride with out his Dad. As from then he stood as a loner and dreamed of being a popular part in a popurlar pride.
Help was found by a even kinder female but sadly, she got ill by eating a poisoned zebra, and then she got poisoned, and was left to die. He was left with rain and thunder/ lightning and all he had was memories of people who cared for him who he was with from the whole past of his life.
PARENTS: Mother- Akiki, Farther- Kiak, Brother- Soloyal
[like a family member:] Raiser- Hemiba
SIBLINGS: N/A
CHILDREN: N/A
LOVER: N/A
There are some parts in the personality section that are redundant and more description in the appearance would be nice, as you spent some time describing where his muscles are. Really, just overall you need to clarify parts and fix up the grammar. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. ^^